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  Origins of Aniyi content 13+ I've chosen to have an age group of 13 years and older basically because of mild language and violence in the book and also because of the scientific features that one can learn from. The book is naturally a martial arts story with gory side effects. I wanted it to be really believable in the form of life and death and of supernatural and science. LANGUAGE: The language is very mild in Aniyi's Comic. In which i didn't want major curse words in the book. the only one's i actually considered in the book was the one's from the bible. On the conturary, the 1st issue that was created had alot of vulgar language in the book an i didn't see it as proper. I didn't want Aniyi to be seen as unprofessional in any way but i did want to relate to my age groups so that's why i changed it dramatically in issue no. 2 and from then on. VIOLENCE: The violence in Comic is more realistic. Like what would happen if this happened, kind of theory. Without taking away anything because i know that from a certain age group that people usually like the gory type of scenes. So with the action i wanted to hold absolutely nothing back from the jump start. With that being said i needed something to cling on to since the language was dubbed down because young people are not my only audience. Absolutely no strong sexual content at all. I may have an innocent kiss in it and maybe show a little bit of cleavage but i will not have any nudity in my comic at all. REALISTIC FEATURES: Even though Chi is a form of energy and martial artist normally respond to it as a form of life force and something that experienced fighters can control, I did a bit of manipulating that aspect of it as well, along with another form of scientific engergy that many can relate to, such as Kinetic Energy. The reasoning for the Kinetic Energy is because i needed something real that not only people can see but can understand very easy. To know that they are apart of the Kinetic Energy every day. When ever they see a vehicle moving or someone running, is a part of kinetic energy. An that will maybe open up doors to Chi around the world for every one to actually take notice in.
  Character bio for Kapu - age: unknown height: 5'9" currently. Normally 6'5" weight: 165 lbs currently. Normally 245lbs hair color: clay orange - currently. Normally - orange/red eye color: icy blue skin color: pale grey - currently. Normally - Cream peach element - none but everything abilities - a very strong Charisma birthday - unknown The great warlord Kapu has a very sticky past, When he was being born, the moon was blood red as though the land was in pain and crying out. One can say that the first life he took was his own mother's. Dying at child birth, his mother was not apart of his life. instead he was raised by his father, a commander and chief of his kinsmen. as a child, kapu was said to be posessed by a demon, and the elders demanded that he was treated by a shaman to take away his evil nature. Mysteriously the entire team of witch doctor who proceeded with the action were all beheaded with the child soaked in blood sat in the middle of the room smiling. Fearful to allow the child to roam free the council and kapu's father agreed to lock the boy away in solitary to keep the kinship safe and unaware of the horific actions. as kapu aged his intellect grew very rapidly. his mature nature allowed him to manipulate every element known within the 4 trines including death and life itself. his powers of persuasion and war tactics made those around him even more fearful. reaching his peak, he demanded an audience with the council and his father to name his the successor of the kinship, but with his sinister track record they declined his offer. with a smile he cursed his topcow Colbre tells the woman soilder to take them to the sacrad grounds for evacuation. he also entrusts Aniyi to take care of them, as his ally. as he's leaving, Feculent rips colbre apart with his tentacles as it rains, it also rains blood! before aniyi and company can reach the evacuation point kaishar, dendroas and rav intercept their transition. with just aniyi and the young woman to protect them, the black flames come in at the last minute. CUT SCENE* a knife through the chest from the back. the bald warrior is killed by some one from behind as he looks on he see's a familiar face!!? BACK SCENE* as samyni is ready for another battle with the trio, he's interupted by a blade like arm that's thrusted directly into his chest!!! a low view of the warlord KAPU end of chapter*  
submit to: submissions@imagecomics.com ONCE, THE PROSPEROUS LAND OF AGEINE WAS HOLD AND RIGHTFUL BIRTH RIGHT TO ALL LIVING CREATURES. EVEN BEAUTY HAS A RIVAL, UGLY, AN SOON IT POORS OUT LIKE CONTAMINATED BLOOD. GREED AND POWER FOR THE LAND THEN TURNED INTO WARS. THE LAND EVENTUALLY SURRENDERED TO THE VIOLENCE AN HATE BETWEEN RACES AND CORRODE APART INTO THE 4 TRINES, AND SEPERATING MAN AND BEAST ALIKE. AS OTHERS AKNOWLEDGED THIS AS AN END TO THE WORLD, ONLY 1 SINGLE MONK TOOK IT UPON HIMSELF TO HELP CHANGE THE IGNORANCE OF EVERYONE. HE TRAVELED TO THE SACRADE WUTAI MOUNTAINS FOR ANSWERS AN DECENDED BACK WITH THE POWER OF SAGES. HE THEN MOLDED THE LAND INTO SIGNS OF EXCELLENCE AND SOON THE ONCE AGEINE THAT WAS DIVIDED BECAUSE OF MALICE WAS NO MORE. NOW SYMBOLS OF HOPE, THE ZODIAC WAS BORN. NOTHING IS PERFECT AND THE YOUNG MONK, NOW KNOWN AS THE JADE EMPEROR, WASN'T AWARE THAT AN EVIL MANIFESTED ALONG WITH HIS DESIGNED HOPE FOR PEACE. AN EVIL SHAPED AS MAN. HE AGED AN FORGED HIS STATUS AS ,WARLORD KAPU. HE WAS BORN OF THE 1ST ZODIAC CREATED BY THE JADE EMPEROR. HE MASSACARED HIS ENTIRE KINSHIP FOR HIS CHAOS THEORIES. YET ONLY TO LET THE WORLD KNOW THAT PLANS AND DREAMS ALWAYS COMES TO AN END AND THAT TRUE JUSTICE IS PURE CHAOS. KAPU WAS NOT ONLY POWERFUL BUT DECEPTIVE AN MANIPULATIVE. HE UNFORCEFULLY POSSESSED AN CREATED HIS OWN SUBORDANENTS AS THEY FOLLOWED HIS EVERY COMMAND AND WAR WAS WAGED YET AGAIN. THROUGH THIS AGE OF DARKNESS, THE REBELLION GREW STRONGER WITH A YOUNG DRAKONIAN, NAMED GHANA. GHANA WAS PART OF THE YOUNG BUT POWERFUL KINSHIP KNOWN AS THE DRAKON'S. HIS MORAL AND EXCELLENCE ENDED KAPU'S LONG TERRANY RANE UPON THE PEACFUL LANDS. EVEN THOUGH HE WASNT APART OF THE OTHER KINSHIPS, THE JADE EMPEROR REQUESTED GHANA TO BE SHRINED IN EVERY KINSHIP. HIS FAITHFULNESS AN COURAGE WOULD BE REMEMBERED THROUGHOUT THE LAND FOREVER. IN THIS TIME OF PEACE AND THE NEW AGE IS BORN, GENERATIONS OF YOUTHFUL WARRIORS AND PATHS ARE FORGED. ONE IN PARTICULAR IS ANIYI. GENTLE IN NATURE BUT A WANNA BE PROUD WARRIOR. IN HIS YOUNG LIFE HE'S PLUNGED INTO DARKNESS AS HIS KINSHIP IS IRRATICATED BY THE NEWLEY RESSURECTED KAPU AND HE'S LEFT FOR DEAD. ANIYI IS SALVAGED BY A STRANGER OF THE RAT KINSHIP. AS ANIYI'S HAUNTED BY THE DEATHS OF HIS FAMILY AND FRIENDS, HE SEARCHES FOR REVENGE AGAINST KAPU. WHAT HE FINDS IS NEW COMPANIONS AND HOPE FOR THE BEST PEASE. AS HE CHOOSE'S A RIGHTEOUS PATH THAT HE'S CHOSEN. AS THE YEARS PASS, ANIYI AND HIS COMRADS DEFEND THE WORLD AGAINST KAPU 2ND RANE AND LAYS THE WARLORD TO REST IN A DUEL NOT BETWEEN NATIONS OR KINSMEN, BUT AGAINST EVIL IT SELF. IMAGE COMICS Submissions: Image comics are unique in that the comics they publish are creator owned. Therefore, they are generally looking for complete comics to publish. Here are some things you will need to include: 1. A cover letter with important contact info – name, address, phone, etc. You must include an email address. 2. Typed, one page synopsis of the story. 3. Minimum five pages of fully drawn, inked, and lettered work. It does not need to be in color. Do not send original art. 4. Include a mock up of the cover. Image does not accept scripts for comic books. They do accept penciling, inking, coloring, and lettering samples in case they need to look for an artist for a project. You can send submission to: Submissions c/o Image Comics 1942 University Ave. Suite 305 Berkeley, CA 94704 Publisher: Erik Larsen www.imagecomics.com  characters in story Aniyi main character - aniyi samyni - father of aniyi and husband to zandra parsh. he is the Guy you'd need to speak to if there was a war brewing. He holds the tag of General of the 1st Trine, or General of the Black Flames, given to Samyni at the youthful age of 16 as soon as he won the great race. the sacred power was release by the Jade emperor as a reward for his excellence and courage. Shortly after that when he was 18 zandra Paragon's Council Members_ Cheif Cheektowaga Kominore- madam haysin- 3 of Drakons Elite Soilders of the 1st Trine- Colbre - Abaddon - Sorrinn- Evil Characters Kaishar - older sibling of Kishar. he know no bounds in his actions. even though he gets on his sisters nerves with his accessive attitube. he's just as powerful with his ice elements Kishar - the younger twin of Kaishar. she's more tactical and more sadistic than him as well "The 6 Hunters" Dendroas- of the snake kinship Rav- he who wants to be perfect. of the horse kinship Feculent- from the monkai kinship. the lost soul Lyssa Inu (bad dog - japanese) - The Greeks derived the word lyssa, from lud or "violent"; he who loves. the one inlove with Kishar who refuse's to leave her side Ovis Mouflon - of the ram kinship. *character need information* Darius knnew - other characters Joe Vanni - cheif who's known samyni since he was a kid CHAPTER 2 PROGRESSION OF STORY WHY IS THE REASON THAT THE HUNTERS ARE ATTACKING THE DRAKON KINSHI? in this chapter, you will learn them by names, Kaishar and Kishar are brothers and sisters and the other 6 call them selves, The 6 Hunters. they search for a particular item or substance that is in the possesion of the drakon kinship. right here you will know that they arent the one's pulling the strings. but an even greater power is. their team splits up into 2. Kaishar commands the 1st crew, he's accompined with 2 other ancient warlords, Dendroas and Rav. they head for a special power source in the near area(aniyi and samyni). Kishar is accompanied with the mysterious Lyssa, Feculent, Ovis an Darius to head down to the kinship. (twist) As the two teams part ways Kaishar warns kishar that her contact person better have had success tracking the intel down, because death is certain for the two of them. There is a new character introduced, he's running through the town in a panic. Possibilities for this characters actions: 1) coming to tell the council what he seen when the two guards were killed. 2) to warn the council of a traitor and the rise of an enemy let's put this into persepective - he's trying to warn the council of the attack on the kinship and a traitor because he heard the name of the person that was discused so he's trying to save the council (political) and town from the attack. since the town is preparing for the Celebration for the next Great Race everyone thinks it's a prank, so life carry's on as usual. THE ATTACK ON SAMYNI AND ANIYI: an immediate attack is done to samyni and aniyi, but the target is Samyni. in the begining Kishar warns the team of a unique and very powerful Arumas in the area. *Samyni is the General of the 1st Trine* *Trine consists of the Drakon, Rat and Monkai kinships* with out notice, accept for aniyi, they attack Samyni. aniyi warns his father and then samyni engadges with the 3 suspects, showing his great power he deflects Rav and Kaishar away to deal with Dendroas alone. Dendroas neck expands to an unprecidented state. it stretches far enough to evade the vicious knee that samyni was about to deliver *here i wanted to show you that just because they're not generals doesn't mean that these enemies will die quickly, and to show that Dendroas isn't a normal person. He's of the snakai kinship* excited as he is aniyi doesn't realise the situation at hand. instead of fearing it he's excited for an oppertunity at the facing a real opponent. Samyni on the other hand is deep inthought about his son, now realising that aniyi is no longer that child. He's a young man now. and also that aniyi was able to sense the enemies arumas and he wasn't (he - Samyni). If samyni couldn't sense their energy then he projected to aniyi that there may be others and he needs to head back to the village and warn the military and get his mother to safety. Kaishar intercepts the request with his own show off personality by sending a blizzard vortex of ice to send aniyi and samyni to their icy graves. in the mist of the blizzard samyni transforms back to his *GBF* mode and throws aniyi as far away from the area as possible. (GBF - General of the Black Flames) then ignites him self and sacrafices his life to save aniyi. MOVING BACK TO THE DRAKON KINSHIP: Kishar, Lyssa, Ovis and Darius plunge the attack on the villiage. Ovis of the ram kinship show case's a pretty but deadly Swift* missile launching to open the gates and destroy the city. but also it gives them stealth to search while they destroy. *swift* (a combination of wind and lighting elements. of the ram kinship. I created another character like this one before. tie them to together for an even deeper story.) NOTE: here is not alot of words but action I show Feculent's true nature by killing a couple of innocent bistanders. these sort of barbs or viens come out of his arms and torso plunging into his victims and extracting their essence or fluids out and into his being, giving him a deadly and rutheless personality. then since zandra was in the town shes bound to run into one of them, so feculent is there to meet her. *NOTE* - IN THE BEGINING OF THIS CHAPTER ZANDRA IS INTOWN AND HAS A GWRAITH FRUIT THAT WILL TIE IN FECULENT AND ANIYI IN A LATER CHAPTER kishar and lyssa are together and kills a group of soilders with her amazing lava like energy, scorching the air and buring them into ash's. aniyi returns to see his home in process of being ruined and here is where i'll set in the world he lives in. but he hears his mothers voice in frantic. he quickly rushes to the scene where she is and slashes Feculent with a right knee to the his mask. There a crack in the mask, aniyi quickly try's to finish him off with a left hook in which shatters half of his mask off. as this happens Feculents true nature is revealed as a large amount of the barbs shreads his top part of the cloak off viliantly. showing his real self. *END OF CHAPTER*    blk1 hey babe, that WAS a great concert! i'm glad you enjoyed your self old man: well i'll be, such beauty zandra: hmm, why's Gwraith fruit is a different color this season. i wonder why the sudden change? ma'am i want you to have this! oh wow thank you! even though your an older woman you still look lovely... ...older woman!? this older woman can kick your A-- Hey!? watch it!! sound FX(bump) Just shut up and get out of the my way sound FX (vvvrrroooomm) Everyone move it |
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